sounds like there's a cock in your mouth.
There is a cock in your mouth.
You don't answer your phone, ass.
This gives me a whole new perspective...
a really shitty one.
Precisely my intention. Thanks for the nothing.
God, she definitely don't want it.
I feel your pain. Only because this is awful.
You had me at goodbye,
This was the biggest piece of shit I've ever heard. 15 seconds into the song and my ears were already bleeding as if they were menstruating virgins being penetrated by well endowed black men. You're a horrible artist and may God have mercy on your soul.
Thanks! To be completely honest I just ran out of ideas, but I intend to try again. I'll keep your advice in mind. : D
The beat never drops...
Add a snare or something?
Please finish this.
I really liked the direction this was going at first, but the second guitar part just sounds too fake and cheesy. It might sound good if it was a real guitar, I suggest taking it out. I'm hooked on this already, I love how the organ contributes so much to the sound of guitar. Pure awesomeness when everything really comes together.
alright, i know the guitar sounds cheesy, i coundnt come up with anything good,
but fersure i will fix it soon
No one can deny that the bass line is ill.
Thanks for the review, HenryNormous! ;P
SHIT HAS MAD FLOW
Your flow was on point but some of the rhymes were too simple for my taste. The lyrics were sincere, I'm a big fan of that. You have a great voice for rap and I hope to hear more.
I used to go all crazy with the words, but unfortunately no one can follow it. So I try to find a balance somewhere inbetween. Will never make everyone happy heh. Thanks for the words man. I'll keep on releasing on my account and make sure to check Dex's (Hellzguardian) profile too.
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